Nice. Really catches the brisk and creepy autumn night that's appropriate for Halloween. Can just about hear those bats squealing and feel a chilly breeze.
Bottom of the horns are messed up as if there's extra piece of skin, and the teeth are inconsistent as well. I am generally not a fan of these animated ones since I've barely seen any that actually look good to my eye. It's all up to a preference of course, but hopefully you understand at least some of the downvotes now.
I really want to release it, in fact, I want to do LoRAs of other PC-98 characters. but I think this LoRA can be improved a little bit more. give me some more time and I'll release it.